雅思写作之如何写长句

一、“角色定位”介绍

其实“角色定位”就是感情的表达，真正在写作中融入感情的体现。在“角色定位”中，复杂的长句里的成分不再“死气沉沉”，而是一个个演员“活灵活现”地出现在我们面前，上演着一出出多样的好戏。

所谓的“角色定位”就是专门针对一句话中出现多个主语，动词等的复杂长句的分析方法。我们将谓语动词和主语分别定位为“男女主角”，而剩余的可根据句型定位为“一二三配角”。想告诉各位确立好主次关系之后就可按序写作，防止毫无头绪不分先后的胡乱写法，以更好地帮助完成独立的“创作”和感情的“写作”。

二、“角色定位”实例

现在以雅思写作中关于part-time job的一句话为例，利用“角色定位”来试分析。

如：兼职工作会使他们过早接触一些社会丑陋的现象，因为学生们正处在成型期，无法辨明是非，所以很容易会被误入歧途。

许多同学一看到这句话就犯晕，只觉错综复杂，然而对以上这句话稍作分析，我们不难发现以下特点：

1，2个名词(词组)：兼职工作&学生们

2，4个动词(词组)：使...接触，处于，辨明&误入歧途

1，将本句中“兼职工作”定位为“女主角”即主角名词，“使…接触”定位为“男主角”即主角动词，他们将会出现在长句子的主句中，其他为配角，再配合进从句等各种表达，那么本句就可以写成：

l Part-time job makes students get in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier，because they are in shaping period and can not distinguish the right from the wrong clearly, which may make them go astray easily.

2，将本句中“学生们”定位为“女主角”，“辨明”定位为“男主角”，其他为配角，那么本句可以写成：

l Students can not tell the right from the wrong clearly due to their staying at shaping period, so the part-time job, which may get them in touch with certain ugly phenomenon in the society earlier, might easily make them go astray.

3，将本句中“学生们”定位为“女主角”，“处于”定位为“男主角”，其他为配角，那么本句可以写成：

l Lacking of the ability to distinguish the right and wrong, students are in the period of shaping; as a result they may easily go astray if they take part in part-time job which may make them contact some ugly phenomenon in the society.

4，将本句中“学生们”定位为“女主角”，“误入歧途”定位为“男主角”，其他为配角，那么本句还可以写成：

l Students may easily go astray when they have part-time jobs which may let then face some ugly phenomenon in the society earlier, because of the shaping period in which they lack the ability to tell right and wrong clearly.